May 24, 2023·edited May 25, 2023Liked by Bowen Dwelle
Almost as good as when you tell it in person. One of my favorite stories of yours. I was just thinking about it the other night while reading the Naked Mind.
Thank you for reading my friend. I have to say, I published that in haste, and in something of an addled state. I re-wrote the whole thing again after reviewing with my writing group this morning. I like it better now!
Thanks to all of you early readers who put your eyes on this piece right away. There are always further edits that I can make, but in this case, I felt a deeper edit was in order almost immediately, so I did pretty much a full rewrite of this piece today. Have another look if you’re curious to see how much a piece of writing can change!
Almost as good as when you tell it in person. One of my favorite stories of yours. I was just thinking about it the other night while reading the Naked Mind.
Thank you for reading my friend. I have to say, I published that in haste, and in something of an addled state. I re-wrote the whole thing again after reviewing with my writing group this morning. I like it better now!
Thanks to all of you early readers who put your eyes on this piece right away. There are always further edits that I can make, but in this case, I felt a deeper edit was in order almost immediately, so I did pretty much a full rewrite of this piece today. Have another look if you’re curious to see how much a piece of writing can change!