May 24, 2023·edited May 25, 2023Liked by Bowen Dwelle
Almost as good as when you tell it in person. One of my favorite stories of yours. I was just thinking about it the other night while reading the Naked Mind.
Thanks to all of you early readers who put your eyes on this piece right away. There are always further edits that I can make, but in this case, I felt a deeper edit was in order almost immediately, so I did pretty much a full rewrite of this piece today. Have another look if you’re curious to see how much a piece of writing can change!
Almost as good as when you tell it in person. One of my favorite stories of yours. I was just thinking about it the other night while reading the Naked Mind.
Thanks to all of you early readers who put your eyes on this piece right away. There are always further edits that I can make, but in this case, I felt a deeper edit was in order almost immediately, so I did pretty much a full rewrite of this piece today. Have another look if you’re curious to see how much a piece of writing can change!