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Updated with big edit and voiceover -- thanks to Chris for the reading and notes!

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I like this ending much better. Your story captured my interest and left me hungry to know how things ended with Julie and what lessons you learned.

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You know how it is sometimes when you’re anxious to wrap it up, but it’s not really finished yet? The story I mean...

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Mar 22, 2023Liked by Bowen Dwelle

I do prefer your voice narrating to the Better Than Us nannybot

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thanks Shawn... I will update with voice shortly!

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Mar 24, 2023·edited Mar 24, 2023Author

Thanks to another close reader, I just realized that I had “tall rows of midnight corn,” but of course it wouldn’t have been tall in the middle of winter. I was mixing up my memory of that same road from August. Fixed! Cheers Roddy.

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